Korressa - Revision history

Lhianneth at 18:45, 14 October 2015

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Lhianneth at 01:56, 22 August 2015

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Lhianneth at 01:05, 5 August 2015

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Lhianneth: /* The Present */

2015-08-01T22:41:41Z

‎The Present

Lhianneth at 19:58, 1 August 2015

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Lhianneth: /* Dayva */

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‎Dayva

Lhianneth at 01:56, 1 August 2015

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Lhianneth: /* Description */

2015-08-01T01:38:01Z

‎Description

Lhianneth at 23:12, 31 July 2015

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Lhianneth: /* Description */

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‎Description

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 ==Background==
 ===Origins===
-Little has been revealed of Korressa's origins, except that she comes from a snowy land to the north, and that her people greatly fear dragons. Where she comes from, she has explained, dragons are the terrible messengers of her goddess, and have long been tyrants controlling the lives of their subjects.
+Little has been revealed of Korressa's origins, except that she comes from a snowy land to the north, and that her people greatly fear dragons. Where she comes from, she has explained, dragons are the terrible messengers of an important goddess, and have long been tyrants controlling the lives of their subjects.
 Korressa has voiced distaste for dragons on more than one occasion as a result.
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 ==The Present==
-Korressa left for a short time to continue her search, riding with her mare Dayva through the surrounding countryside for several weeks without success. Her return to the Dagger saw her greeted by [[Ailova]], [[Derwyn]] and [[Perilat]] in the Inn's stables. She now resides temporarily at the Inn proper.
+Korressa left for a short time in the summer to continue her search, riding with her mare Dayva through the surrounding countryside for several weeks without success. Her return to the Dagger saw her greeted by [[Ailova]], [[Derwyn]] and [[Perilat]] in the Inn's stables. She now resides temporarily at the Inn proper.
 Due to unsettling nightmares, she has taken to avoiding sleep around the days and nights of the full moon. During these periods, she can be find wandering the area around the tavern, trying to keep busy. Dayva puts up with extra attention and grooming on these days.
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 ==Plots==
 ===[http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewforum.php?f=77| Season of Dreams] / The Golden City===
-[http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=4704| White Moth] (active/open thread)
+[http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=4704| White Moth] (finished/closed thread)
 [http://brokendagger.com/bb//viewtopic.php?f=49&t=4723| Pathways and Anchors] (active thread)

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 ===[http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewforum.php?f=77| Season of Dreams] / The Golden City===
 [http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=4704| White Moth] (active/open thread)
 [[Category:Characters]] [[Category:Active_Characters]]

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 | name          =    Korressa n’tel Parven
 | title         =    Priestess of Hira
 | hair_colour   =    White blonde
 | eye_colour    =    Purple-ringed blue
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-While she is not overtly magical, in dim lighting, she has been mistaken for elven and (more ominously) vampiric, and is neither of these.
+While she is not overtly magical, in dim lighting, she has been mistaken for elven and (more ominously) vampiric, but is neither of these.
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 ==Plots==
-Currently N/A
+===[http://brokendagger.com/bb/viewforum.php?f=77| Season of Dreams] / The Golden City===
-[[Category:Characters]] | [[Category:Active_Characters]]

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 ==The Present==
 Korressa left for a short time to continue her search, riding with her mare Dayva through the surrounding countryside for several weeks without success. Her return to the Dagger saw her greeted by [[Ailova]], [[Derwyn]] and [[Perilat]] in the Inn's stables. She now resides temporarily at the Inn proper.
 ==Plots==

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 Dayva stands a bit over 17 hands high, with white feathered socks and a blaze that covers the left half of her face. The eye covered by this blaze is a bright blue, while her other eye is ordinary brown.
-Korressa received the mare from a farmer wishing to make a sacrifice; he believed that the filly had the evil eye, and would ruin his crops were he to raise her to draw a plow. Korressa took the filly in and raised her instead to be a fine mount. As a result, all of the mare's tack have been made in accordance to the priestess's specifications, including a special stirrup that allows her to carry her glaive easily while on horseback.
+Korressa received the mare from a farmer wishing to make a sacrifice; he believed that the filly had the evil eye, and would ruin his crops were he to raise her to draw a plow. Korressa took the filly in and raised her instead to be a fine mount. As a result, all of the mare's tack has been made in accordance to the priestess's specifications, including a special stirrup that allows her to carry her glaive easily while on horseback.
 The horse is of even temperament, and remarkably placid, with a fondness for apples.

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 | title         =    Priestess of Hira
 | hair_colour   =    White blonde
-| eye_colour    =    Lavender-ringed blue
+| eye_colour    =    Purple-ringed blue
 | height        =    5ft. 11in.
 | build         =    Tall and lean

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 Korressa is tall and thin, with broad hips and shoulders. Her actual mass is frequently disguised by voluminous layers of cloth, but tightly laced boots and vambraces reveal that lean limbs likely hide beneath her attire. Likewise, Korressa has hands that are long and slim, with the nails kept short, clean, and unadorned. Hers is an angular face that makes it difficult to gauge her age, and a penchant for dark apparel contrasts sharply with skin that is pale and prone to sunburn. She has hair that is nearly as light in colour as her skin, and it is hard to tell without careful study, but some of the fine hair has gone prematurely silver at the temples. She maintains the long, pin-straight hair with a complex arrangement of braids, secured with silver findings and rings. She frequently pulls the entire mass high off her nape with a leather thong.
-Her eyes are a bright blue, ringed with a dark, seemingly purple limbal ring. They are rimmed with pale, almost white eyelashes, and eyebrows the barely show against her skin.
+Her eyes are a bright blue, ringed with a dark, seemingly purple limbal ring. They are rimmed with pale, almost white eyelashes, and eyebrows that barely show against her skin.
 While she is not overtly magical, in dim lighting, she has been mistaken for elven and (more ominously) vampiric, and is neither of these.
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 The horse is of even temperament, and remarkably placid, with a fondness for apples.
 ==Background==

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 On warmer days, she has been known to roll up her sleeves and remove her bracers, but never goes fully bare-armed.
 ===Dayva===
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 The horse is of even temperament, and remarkably placid, with a fondness for apples.
 ==Background==

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 ==Description==
-Korressa is tall and thin, with broad hips and shoulders. Her actual mass is frequently disguised by voluminous layers of cloth, but tightly laced boots and vambraces reveal that lean limbs likely hide beneath her attire. Likewise, Korressa has hands that are long and slim, with the nails kept short, clean, and unadorned. Hers is an angular face that is that makes it difficult to gauge her age, and a penchant for dark apparel contrasts sharply with skin that is pale and prone to sunburn. She has hair that is nearly as light in colour as her skin, and it is hard to tell without careful study, but some of the fine hair has gone prematurely silver at the temples. She maintains the long, pin-straight hair with a complex arrangement of braids, secured with silver findings and rings. She frequently pulls the entire mass high off her nape with a leather thong.
+Korressa is tall and thin, with broad hips and shoulders. Her actual mass is frequently disguised by voluminous layers of cloth, but tightly laced boots and vambraces reveal that lean limbs likely hide beneath her attire. Likewise, Korressa has hands that are long and slim, with the nails kept short, clean, and unadorned. Hers is an angular face that makes it difficult to gauge her age, and a penchant for dark apparel contrasts sharply with skin that is pale and prone to sunburn. She has hair that is nearly as light in colour as her skin, and it is hard to tell without careful study, but some of the fine hair has gone prematurely silver at the temples. She maintains the long, pin-straight hair with a complex arrangement of braids, secured with silver findings and rings. She frequently pulls the entire mass high off her nape with a leather thong.
 Her eyes are a bright blue, ringed with a dark, seemingly purple limbal ring. They are rimmed with pale, almost white eyelashes, and eyebrows the barely show against her skin.